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Post by Kaisersesch on Mar 29, 2019 3:54:53 GMT
Here is the current recruitment telegram. Please give me input as to how you think it can be improved! Thank you very much.
If you use this, replace the signature with your own nation's name.
[b]Hallo %NATION%![/b]
[b][region]Saarland[/region][/b] is a brand-spankin'-new region with imperial (but friendly!*) ambitions. We're looking for ambitious and amicable allies to help our region grow and prosper.
In [b][region]Saarland[/region][/b] we have:
• An immersive roleplay world where you can lead your nation to honor and glory!** • A regional government that all citizens can participate in. • A small but dedicated community built upon the ideas of cooperation and the common good. • The goal of an expansive multi-region empire to rival even the greatest regions in NationStates.
Do you think you have what it takes to turn [b][region]Saarland[/region][/b] from a nobody to a somebody? If you do, why don't you make yourself at home, I'll pour you a Coke and serve you some hors d'oeuvres, and we'll get down to business.
[b]Auf Wiedersehen,[/b]
- [nation=long]Kaisersesch[/nation], emperor of [b][region]Saarland[/region][/b]
* [i]Imperial ambitions are friendly in regards to citizens and protectorates of Saarland. Imperial ambitions may not be friendly for those outside of Saarland. Terms and conditions may apply.[/i] ** [i]Please pursue honor and glory responsibly. Honor and glory are neither implied nor guaranteed.[/i]
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Post by sylestone on Apr 24, 2019 8:07:44 GMT
Here is the current recruitment telegram. Please give me input as to how you think it can be improved! Thank you very much. If you use this, replace the signature with your own nation's name.[b]Hallo %NATION%![/b]
[b][region]Saarland[/region][/b] is a brand-spankin'-new region with imperial (but friendly!*) ambitions. We're looking for ambitious and amicable allies to help our region grow and prosper.
In [b][region]Saarland[/region][/b] we have:
• An immersive roleplay world where you can lead your nation to honor and glory!** • A regional government that all citizens can participate in. • A small but dedicated community built upon the ideas of cooperation and the common good. • The goal of an expansive multi-region empire to rival even the greatest regions in NationStates.
Do you think you have what it takes to turn [b][region]Saarland[/region][/b] from a nobody to a somebody? If you do, why don't you make yourself at home, I'll pour you a Coke and serve you some hors d'oeuvres, and we'll get down to business.
[b]Auf Wiedersehen,[/b]
- [nation=long]Kaisersesch[/nation], emperor of [b][region]Saarland[/region][/b]
* [i]Imperial ambitions are friendly in regards to citizens and protectorates of Saarland. Imperial ambitions may not be friendly for those outside of Saarland. Terms and conditions may apply.[/i] ** [i]Please pursue honor and glory responsibly. Honor and glory are neither implied nor guaranteed.[/i] It says small but dedicated, and I believe that we should change it too small, fast growing and dedicated
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